My continuing piece of
fiction continues…
DARKENING STURGEONS
Chapter Four
by John L. Harmon
Young
lovers, dressed in matching white shirts, khaki shorts, and brown hiking boots,
stroll hand-in-hand through Stickler Woods, basking in the sweet afterglow of
sharing a glorious sunrise. The young
man and young woman had spread a soft blanket on Stickler Hill and breakfasted as
the dawn broke, splashing the valley below with warm, vivid color. Each building in Sturgeons radiated with the
promise of a new day, full of new experiences.
In the distance, on the opposite side of town, Lake Pontoon shimmered
like liquid gold, somehow appearing more tranquil than ever, despite the crazy
story that had circulated throughout town by yesterday evening.
The
strange disappearance of Bob Kinney barely registers on their youthful minds,
for it was an odd tale involving old people.
All they can focus on is the sumptuous experience of their sunrise
breakfast.
“Thanks
for making it with me, Tracy,” Tommy Schroder expresses his sincere gratitude,
giving his girl’s hand a gentle squeeze.
“You’re
welcome, Tommy.” Tracy Newcastle smiles
warmly at her beau and adds, “Thank you for bringing the bananas.”
“No. Thank you, Tracy,” Tommy corrects. “The bananas were your suggestion and they
fit in perfectly.”
A
comfortable silence settles between the young soulmates as they continue their
woodland stroll to their respective homes.
He swings the picnic basket, in his free hand, a little higher. She cuddles the rolled-up blanket, tucked
under her free arm, a little tighter.
The sun shining, the birds singing, and the heavy, sweet smell of
Stickler Woods seem to reflect the feelings they share for one another.
Tommy
Schroder and Tracy Newcastle are, for romantics, the epitome of High School
Sweethearts. Dating since 8th
grade, the inseparable lovebirds are still going strong during this summer
before senior year. For cynics, the
quarterback and the cheerleader are vomit-inducing plastic dolls with perfect
blond hair, empty blue eyes, and lightly sun-kissed skin.
“I’ve
gotta take a leak,” Tommy crudely interrupts their pleasant stroll. Releasing hands and giving Tracy the picnic
basket, he kisses her cheek, as if in fond farewell.
“Hurry
back,” Tracy chuckles outwardly, while grimacing inwardly at his choice of
distasteful phrasing. She loves this man
to the point of firmly and foolishly believing he will lose his crasser ways
after senior year, college or finally marriage.
Tommy,
having so sense of appropriate distance, chooses a tree ten feet away to
eliminate behind. The obvious sound of
his zipper shooting down, proceeded by the heavy splattering of a steady
stream, and his relieving sigh, reverberates through the woods.
Tracy,
slightly irritated at Tommy’s urination proximity, turns her back on the hidden
scene and silently wishes he would have picked a tree farther away. Attempting to focus on anything other than
the offending noises, she notices something odd. Something wrong. Something missing.
Just
moments before birds were joyously singing, providing a natural soundtrack for
their love. Now there is silence, except
for Tommy’s never-ending leaking and sighing.
This sudden realization invokes a physical sensation of nameless dread
in Tracy Newcastle, as if all of her childhood fears were just proven true.
“Tommy…”
she begins, facing his direction, but is drowned out by a
bone-chilling clamor.
Initially
it sounds like another of Tommy’s relieving sighs but it escalates into a
baritone scream of horror. Tommy
charges from behind the tree in a dead run and then trips as his khaki shorts
fall around his ankles. The football
player scrambles to erect himself, but his scoreboard clock has hit zero.
Tracy
watches in frozen terror as something black and formless emerges. It’s as if the air itself has darkened,
moving with purpose and thought. The
darkness grabs at her screaming and struggling beau, viciously yanking him off
the ground and pulling him behind the tree.
Tommy
Schroder’s anguished screams abruptly die and this spurs her into action. Dropping the items from their memorable
sunrise breakfast, Tracy Newcastle runs silently for her life, shrieking on the
inside and failing to notice the birds of Stickler Woods resume their cheerful
singing.
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Until next time, Readers, be well …and Freak Out,
JLH
Enjoyed the chapter, and still in awe of your literary talent!! I'm sure your readers will agree!! Kudos!!
ReplyDeleteI appreciate your comment/compliment, Pete! : )
DeleteBananas, you say? 😂
ReplyDeleteBananas are part of a healthy sunrise breakfast. 🍌 😂
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